Hi!
Here's a critique from me, so I hope you understand.
So here's a comment about Dawn:
you hit her hair shadings.It's great.Her gown is great designed and shaded.Her hands are enough big.The palm is great, just fingers are bit wide and short.I know she doesn't break her fingers.Legs are ok!Does feet are also great, just the fingers are shorter and a bit thiner.

The bed is awesome, I have no words about the bed.Piplup has great colors and shadings.I think the stem is wide,but anyways great job!!The curtain is great, I like the tranpency.I see you used a lot of layers, I see you used...8 layers.

Hmmm what can I say about this piece. Well, first I’d like to say what drew me to this piece. Those things are the cute Piplup plushie, and the adorable Cleffa’s on Dawn’s nightgown.

This is a wonderful colorful piece of art. I love how some colors stand out more than others, like the wonderfully protruded sunlight. The plushie and nightgown really show the how young and innocent she is.

Now, on to what I would fix. Well, the first thing is her left foot. It needs toes silly I know you addressed that in the “Artist’s Comments” and that is why I am not dwelling on it. The next thing, is her mouth. Though it does look good with what looks like two dots, I myself think it would look better if it was just a small line instead of the two dots.

But other than those things, I think this is an adorably cute, wonderful, amazing piece of art, and I really hope to see more amazing pieces from you in the future!

*runs of off to watch you*


_{Please forgive the critique if it sucks, I'm still learning to give good ones.}